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May it be that the rain has begun
And here I am always searching for fun
but that time seems to linger well
looking behind the veil I become pale

For the truth is that my youth holds dear
The sun, the breeze but now it holds fear
for ti's new step I have taken
where I hold forth my heart with a maiden

Bell rings and rings on finger stays
and yet it seems to last for days
But now its been a month since it begun
I am now called on to union, now a husband

And here lies what can be done with the sun
For all I could think about is to be her better man
with bills, dreams and all of those wants and needs
I caution myself for my soul also has to feed

Oh such a tight rope, with all of this worry
but not as much to make me melancholy
I just hope with each and passing day
I could balance the life of work, love and play
A former groom
Writer's note: Just want to write about how a newly wed feels.
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Rough draft: version 0.1 Created May 8, 2015
Rough draft: version 0.2 Created June 3, 2015

"Ow it was just nothing. You know how it is. That chaos, that whirlwind that can't be stopped by soothing music, by any kind of mantra,. Because it is a scream, a scream in the wind. Where it started first as a single sigh, a single thought, then an idea. An idea became a whisper, a whisper became a dream,an ambition and then out of nothing, action, Action so intense, it has to be put into a straight jacket, and so without a gateway, without a way to vent, an output, it became a word, a scream. It became the chaos of this world.

I don't understand... how can that single scream became a chaos?

Because that scream hasn't been uttered yet.

Something that hasn't happened, created chaos? Yes? Sometimes inactions can be..... so powerful"

I've read my notes again and again. Even before anything has happened, somehow I think I might have knew that something bigger than myself is unfolding. I would either yield and be crushed by its weight or go on and make something awesome...maybe?

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The thing is, I want the world to know my work, I just don't want them to know who I am. I feel that on its purest essence, what I do, however heart felt it is, should stand alone. I know how it is related to me, to my heart, to my soul and to my own world, but I feel that if the viewer, would know me, I feel that it would hinder from the true sight, the raw emotion, the innocent concept that my work would mean. It would also be personal on its own if its linked to me rather on its own. But as of always, its up to the viewer.

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The net, screw it. Another poem of mine was lost because of my own stupidity and of course the internet connection... Yeah Screw it and everything right now.
  • Mood: Anger
  • Listening to: Unsolicited background music
  • Reading: Technical Documents
  • Watching: My Monitor
  • Playing: the computer keyboard
  • Eating: None
  • Drinking: Water... a lot of it

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:iconwritingangel2010:
Writingangel2010 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Student Writer
Thanks for the watch! 
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archaicglint Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Student Writer
Keep forgetting to add you on the watch :P
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:iconwritingangel2010:
Writingangel2010 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Writer
Lol, you've added me :) Thanks for that.
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archaicglint Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Student Writer
No worries :)
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arnhival Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nahihilo ako..drop lang kapatid hahahaha... :D
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
boss! ima commission you again another poeem xD
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archaicglint Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Writer
Sure, note me lang for the specs :)
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:iconyakitatepan:
YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woooh! fellow Filipino deviant :salute:
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archaicglint Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Writer
Yes :D feel free to browse my gallery

Saludo!
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:iconyakitatepan:
YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're more on literature ey

support Filipino deviants :')
good luck po sa inyo sir!
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