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A Sad story about Rain

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I tried to whisper my sorrow
onto the evening and to my pillow
and I was reminded so bitterly
that there was nothing left of me

There was nothing left to cry
and I was so scared I'd die
of heartbreak and so much pain
and then you reminded me of the rain

You told me how you love the shower
the little droplets, pitter-patter of water
and how cool that it made us closer
Oh you whisper that you hoped it was forever

But now all of it was shattered
no more whispers nor forever
just a pillow and this cold evening
the only thing I have for mourning

I never liked the rain
but I had you to gain
I didn't mind it at all
twas just a small detail to call

It made me shiver and made me sleepy
I felt like I want to be lazy
I was more enamored with the sun
With whom I could play and have fun

But since you loved the rain so much
I kept my silence and just watch
appreciating the silliness you made me do
since I was so in love with you

But now that you've left me be
rain has  becomes an unbearable agony
and though I know the sun will shine again
I have to endure the cold water that glisten
Writer's Note:

Something I thought about while thinking about rain.
Purely fictional

What does rain remind you of?
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gorillazforever2000's avatar
I picture rain as an attempt from the gods to make the world beautiful again. But I don't think it's working...